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Spyce 2011

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Been quite some time since I've drawn Spyce. (aside from her recent ref sheet). So here she is :)

ha, oh my. Apparently it's been so long since I've drawn her that I totally spaced the fact that she has a red muzzle :faint:

:star:Video of this painting can be seen here: [link]

Skeletal trace and ref: [link] ..

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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Please pay no attention to the star-rating, the critique is what matters. The stars are only rated to allow submission.

First of all: I like how you painted the horse itself. You really managed to capture the shiny texture of their fur really well and I also really like how the muscles show so well. Great work!

The tail is also done beautifully as is the mane, but I feel like the plucks of hair near the hooves (the back hooves) don't blend in as beautifully as the rest of the manes. Same goes for the horn, which feels a bit disconnected from the horse.

I also wish you'd have done something a bit more .. special with the background. The reflection of the unicorn helps the viewer place the animal in it's environment, but somehow it still feels a bit out of place since the gradient gives a more 2D-like feeling, whilst the horse is painted beautifully, lifelike and 3D.

That being said: it's a really good drawing. I just think it may need a bit of a background-tweak.